That sounds not bad at all. Some SA-psy feeling to it. Good job!
The only bad thing I can think of is the stupid/annoying/boring drug sample in the beginning. My tip is that you remove it and find something completely different.
I agree with Ormion on Midnight Storm. That is a sick compilation (Shift - The Face!). I think Broken and The Mystery of The Thirteen Crystal Skulls are worth a place in the top also.