Nice track, I like the atmosphere. But it feels a little tight/light, despite of all the sounds. I'd raise the bassdrum quite a bit, and as for the bassline, I'd keep the melody you use in the intro, but then whack in a break and change it, that's really effectful (: also raise the percussion and spread them, and maybe raise the lower frequencies on the bass too (: Maybe a pad would fit in there too.
Good luck!