well, after 1st minute when the faster rhythm kicks in id like to hear some more bass, later when it kicks in its way too 'weak", at least i prefer some dnb with basslines
the work that you did on guitar sounds ok, especially at 1/3 of track, very nice and even more like some "pop" rock tune or smthn, add some marylin manson vocals and you have radio hit
well, some dnb is nice, id like to see some others posting their dnb works here if they have any . it might turn out pretty interesting.
in general your track is ok, imo, it lacks little bit of bass here and there and where it is its too silent. as for psychedelic - well, i find it as usual as other non-psy dnb tracks, not much of a psy here, but it doesnt mean that its bad, not at all, just dont follow trends and do what you feel you like .
verdict - you could work little bit on this track later, perhaps some good mix can come out of it.
my 2c