too short, too much breaks.
utter shite.
nah, just kidding, beginning made me grin at its childish sounds/structure, the very beginning i mean. soon after kicks in very much preferred weirdness, read - together with bass kick the things start to move. at first i wished for some additional "driving" sound/melody, something that would "lead", but throughout the track [which is shamefully short, so id rather see it longer and tell you that this is nothing more than preview sample of what you can do so you go and make it 7-10000 minutes long ] i dug it, as long as you intend it to be such naturally, your way
now, only at 2:30 i thought, ok, there could be something more added at this very moment, since that hihat [or what is it called?] could have come couple of patterns [or whatever you call them pt2] sooner, otherwise at first listen it seemed too extended at that part the only place i sort of spotted id like to hear something more thrown into, one additional track in sequencer, but add killargh, not fillargh there if you do
but thats up to you, if you want to make this track longer, go for it, id sure enjoy to hear it, your work sounds good production wise too, atleast to my ears