imo not a bad track, BUT, imo too extended .
or perhaps add here and there some additional layers to make some parts of track sound not "monotone" or kinda empty when there is nothing in background ?
hmm, id like to see this track around 7min long and with every sound and turn and twist from 11min long one ! btw, those snares [i noticed them after 9th minute] sound sort of cheap-80s-synth pop like, the sound itself, not the rhythm, been listening to skinny puppy too much recently ?
thats my opinion after first listen so far
edit: sorry baba for delay, been fucking lacy.