ok, musically your track is very good although it's too repetitive and certainly needs variation and some lead melody or something, btw i really like your basslines etc,.only that in terms of production it needs a bit more work IMO,e.g your snare drum sounds a bit too loud and irrelevant to the rest of the track, you just try compressing/eqing several sounds as well as the final mix to give emphasis on certain frequencies and make it more vivid and less muddy, certainly it's not a bad track, only that i would recommend you to try learning cubase or at least use more VSTs with fruity cuz production with fruity can be really poor, let alone it's only pattern-based[am i right?]...