+1
I liked the genuinely old school nature of the track, and was impressed how it didn't fall into the traps of the newer stuff. I like how you're able to manipulate the listener with ebbs, flows and layering of melodies and rhythms, as well as the subtle background sound effects. It's not doing anything new, but it's doing the old very well. People would've talked about this ten years ago, and I don't think that's necessarily a bad thing (depends on your motivations). If my own personal taste lacked anything, it would be primary melodies here and there on top of what I thought were secondary, textural melodies, but that's just me. Also, the modulation up and down gets predictable.
Nice track.