Damn man, this is chill out
Well, I kinda like. It's pretty unique cause the unusual low bpm for that kind of track.
The thing is, I really think you're gifted. 1) You have the goa spirit in you 2) you want to spread it around.
When 1) and 2) combine it's always something to get excited about.
You're music is made with very well chosen sounds, however, the structure is something you should work on. I think you got potential to become a true acid madness artist if you just practise.
so my advices:
1) use more time on structure of song
2) use faster bpm's (that's just really what suits you)
3) don't try to imitate. make something you feel like is good. something never ever heard before. think hours in your head of some crazy sounds that could suit in track and then use hours to find that sound. then use hundreds of hours to combine those sounds.