First track you posted is pretty good, but it still misses something, but the second one is completely wrong ! It sounds so random and chaotic, but in a bad way chaotic, like Bahamnut said there is something out of sync...like most of the sounds, not only bass line...Sorry for negative review but that's how I hear it...
My suggestion, TRY not to be so 'twisted' as you try to be, you tend to loose yourself so much...