Negrosex Posted January 8, 2005 Posted January 8, 2005 This is a track that im working on, i posted it on sonic blend but i didn't get any replies. Hopefully i will have more luck here. It's almost finished, just needs some minor adjustments. Tripmotor - Phencyclist v02 What do you think ? Is it good? Quote
Various®Artist© Posted January 8, 2005 Posted January 8, 2005 Look man its realy realy realy monotonious, I mean for bad... It looks like you tried to do 12mn track no matter what, youve got some nice parts, I liked the women scream ;] but you must make it more interesting... cheers Quote
Jikkenteki Posted January 8, 2005 Posted January 8, 2005 The parts and all are decent and there are some good ideas in there, but the development is really slow. It feels like you let everything run for 32 bars before adding a new part when it would have been more efffective to pile them on every 8. As an artist I often used to get stuck in a groove of something and let it run on WAY too long when making a track, so I understand how it happens. Anyways, my advice, make changes more frequently and work on more development, change ups, breaks, etc. Anyways, a good effort with some good stuff in there. Quote
Negrosex Posted January 8, 2005 Author Posted January 8, 2005 Hmm, maby it is too long. But there is stuff going on in the background. Probably to much in the background. I think i will try to bring more sounds up front. Actually it started out as a 8 min track and then i added the wierd ending. I will make some adjustments and post it again. Thanks for the replys! Quote
DigitalDyk Posted January 8, 2005 Posted January 8, 2005 I think I a going to have to agree with these two. This does get boring pretty fast. It sounds cool to start off with but this need some more dynamics and better arrangement. It's a decent effort but I think you can work a lot harder to make this more interesting. Quote
Negrosex Posted January 9, 2005 Author Posted January 9, 2005 I understand. I guess i went wrong from the beginning. The bass is too dominating, and most of the other sounds are kind of backround sounds that doesn't work up front so i have to make some new patches to make it more interresting. I will put this track away for a while and concentrate more on some of my better tracks. Maby i´ll finish it later when i have some fresh ideas. Quote
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