Dajek Posted January 23, 2005 Share Posted January 23, 2005 MY TRACK Ill Renegade Ninja - Recreational Tripping Quite original dub style, not much psychedelic... trippy nevertheless, so give it a try All comments welcome ___________ btw don't distribute it w/o my premission Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sherlockalien Posted January 23, 2005 Share Posted January 23, 2005 so my comments.. I like dub, and I enjoyed your track.. =) now my suggestions: do something about that high-pitched melody that starts at about 1:20 and keeps going until 2:20 or something.. It becomes somehow annoying at points, at least imo.. maybe try making it one octave lower, or some eq or some effects in it, making it less... hmm... ´scratchy and pointy´, and making it more ´round´, if you know what I mean.. j so just try different things with it and see if you get something nicer also, maybe work on some more percussion layers, that would be a nice addition to your track and of course, make it a little longer, and think about making a break somewhere, where you can make a bigger change to the track at one point, maybe change the bassline keys, or whatever... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Towelie Posted January 23, 2005 Share Posted January 23, 2005 nice track.. some sounds are too loud maybe and that 'backbeat' (the reggae rythm thing) 'guitar' would need second chord .. i also didnt find the high pich melody the best .. but nice track otherwise Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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