Dub Track

[Dajek]

MY TRACK

 

Ill Renegade Ninja - Recreational Tripping

 

Quite original dub style, not much psychedelic... trippy nevertheless, so give it a try

 

All comments welcome

 

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btw don't distribute it w/o my premission

[sherlockalien]

so my comments.. I like dub, and I enjoyed your track.. =)

 

now my suggestions:

 

do something about that high-pitched melody that starts at about 1:20 and keeps going until 2:20 or something.. It becomes somehow annoying at points, at least imo.. maybe try making it one octave lower, or some eq or some effects in it, making it less... hmm... ´scratchy and pointy´, and making it more ´round´, if you know what I mean.. j so just try different things with it and see if you get something nicer

 

also, maybe work on some more percussion layers, that would be a nice addition to your track

 

and of course, make it a little longer, and think about making a break somewhere, where you can make a bigger change to the track at one point, maybe change the bassline keys, or whatever...

[Towelie]

nice track.. some sounds are too loud maybe and that 'backbeat' (the reggae rythm thing) 'guitar' would need second chord .. i also didnt find the high pich melody the best .. but nice track otherwise