ritual om Posted March 6, 2005 Posted March 6, 2005 i have at last uploaded my latest track.i want to see if u l ike the whole basis and i would definitely like to reccommend me anything that would complement the track. http://artistgigs.com/artist.pl?id=835 login as a listener. username:listen password:1 the track is full length and freely downloadable! Quote
ritual om Posted March 6, 2005 Author Posted March 6, 2005 sorry!the track's name is:the moment when it all began. Quote
ritual om Posted March 6, 2005 Author Posted March 6, 2005 the site is a bit slow the last 2 days.i hope it will be sorted out soon. Quote
ritual om Posted March 7, 2005 Author Posted March 7, 2005 the above address has some problems so u can listen the track in my new address: http://www.ic-musicmedia.com/artist_pages/...e.php?id=102661 Quote
ritual om Posted March 8, 2005 Author Posted March 8, 2005 this page is really quick.ya can do it.download and give some feedback.it is very important for me Quote
Time_Trap Posted March 8, 2005 Posted March 8, 2005 will download this tomorrow m8, will let you know as soon as i listen to it. what appz have you used? Quote
ritual om Posted March 8, 2005 Author Posted March 8, 2005 fruityloops 3.56,many plugs and rebirth. Quote
Time_Trap Posted March 9, 2005 Posted March 9, 2005 well here's my feedback[sorta harsh]: I believe you should work more on the intro. I especially liked the parts where no melodies were playing.[really liked the way the kick started at about 1 min] That's because i didn't like how the lead sounds. Generally, IMHO, your whole track needs some work on making everything sound better[especially the leads. it seems as if they have been created with some crappy synthesizer]. Quote
ritual om Posted March 9, 2005 Author Posted March 9, 2005 i have to disagree withe lead part.i think the sound of the leads is top notch!anyway thanks for your comments.i may have a false ear! Quote
Time_Trap Posted March 9, 2005 Posted March 9, 2005 i have to disagree withe lead part.i think the sound of the leads is top notch!anyway thanks for your comments.i may have a false ear! 227373[/snapback] i just found most of the sounds to be quite "raw",uncultivated/not processed". have you used EQs , compressors, filters etc etc ? Quote
ritual om Posted March 10, 2005 Author Posted March 10, 2005 lots of processing in there.it may need more,yes in this i agree. but i like the raw,rich sound of the leads.did u like the bassline,the melodies? Quote
Gnome Posted March 10, 2005 Posted March 10, 2005 Hey nice melodies.But you need a lot of work to improve your sound....keep trying,its just a matter of time,keep this Goa melodic feeling,you know how to do it,you just need to do it better Quote
Time_Trap Posted March 10, 2005 Posted March 10, 2005 lots of processing in there.it may need more,yes in this i agree. but i like the raw,rich sound of the leads.did u like the bassline,the melodies? 227844[/snapback] yeah, liked the melodies/basslines. just , as gnome also said, you need to improve your sound[everybody needs to do so ] Quote
ritual om Posted March 11, 2005 Author Posted March 11, 2005 thanks gnome.i am honoured! nick u are right.sound is a bog struggle! Quote
AmithabaBuddha Posted March 11, 2005 Posted March 11, 2005 fruityloops 3.56,many plugs and rebirth. 227101[/snapback] why are you using an old skool version of fruity loops? jump to flstudio 5 unless your machine cant handle it Quote
ritual om Posted March 16, 2005 Author Posted March 16, 2005 that will be done amithaba next week.i will also add in my vst plugs: the reaktor synth. i have tried the demo of reaktor and it is the best synth ever. we'll see how it turns out. Quote
Sonixotic Posted March 16, 2005 Posted March 16, 2005 Ok, had a listen... first of all, good work! Hope I'm not sounding too harsh but here are some of my thoughts: 1) Liked the intro.. nice way the kick comes in 2) Nice bassline melody... but I don't like the bass sound, it's not prominent enough, feels like it's "hiding" behind the kick. Then again everybody has different bass taste, maybe its just me 3) The leads.. I have to agree with other people here: not necessarily that they sound cheap, but they don't drive the tune forward, they're sorta just there. I think they need to be faster, twistier, maybe add some distortion because the sound is very static and thus becomes a bit lame.. simply add more variation to them. A good tune you can certainly make it better! my2cents boom boom Quote
ritual om Posted March 19, 2005 Author Posted March 19, 2005 sonixotic i agree with the lead comments.i will try to work with them.thanks! Quote
vonoom Posted April 6, 2005 Posted April 6, 2005 Had a listen to your track, Some very nice ideas in this track... I agree that the bass needs some more ompf and that the leads could do with a few effects/tweaks. Otherwise nicely composed Quote
crazyboris Posted April 6, 2005 Posted April 6, 2005 i have tried the demo of reaktor and it is the best synth ever. 230247[/snapback] Try out NI's Pro-53 Quote
ritual om Posted April 7, 2005 Author Posted April 7, 2005 i will try it man,thanks. thanks for the feedback! Quote
Dj Atomix Posted April 8, 2005 Posted April 8, 2005 Wow!!! Nice tune guy!!! The only thing i think is about the sound of the hit-hats: is a little bit short, i think you should remove or minimize the cutoff of the hit-hats, making the sound a little more long. On the fruitloops it's simple to do that, try it! Ah, one more thing: lowering the volume of the hit-hats should make more better. Nice work boy!!! Quote
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