Time_Trap Posted April 7, 2005 Share Posted April 7, 2005 =-= DOWNLOAD =-= Track name: ALTERED BRAINCELLS don't hesitate to express whatever you think EDIT#: Btw had posted a previous version sometime ago, but now this is different, variated,less repetitive, sorta mastered. let me know Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
benf52 Posted April 7, 2005 Share Posted April 7, 2005 i think the intro is a little too long.. u might wanna put a break before the kick starts.. also get rid of that lfo sound in the intro once the kick comes in , it sounds too busy... also at 2:47 there is a way too much bass on one sound, needs EQ badly... cut the low frequency it also gets a little too repetitive imo... some melodies are playing the sane thing for too long, maybe try making a longer melody or end it sooner... 2nd part of the track u might wanna put a diff. pattern in the melody cause it's the same as in the 1st part, which makes the track more repetitive... production is not very clear, but i know it's hard with reason to get very clear prod, especially on kick and bass... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Time_Trap Posted April 7, 2005 Author Share Posted April 7, 2005 it not sounding very clear is because of my crappy soundsystem mainly. true about it being repetitive, the best would be to start a new track from scratch Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dj Atomix Posted April 7, 2005 Share Posted April 7, 2005 i've agree too, it's repetitive. Something seens to be missing, perhaps a bassline... Keep up the good work!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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