SunNata Posted May 18, 2005 Share Posted May 18, 2005 Heres an updated version of the track... It still needs a lot of work on the breaks, transitions, mastering & EQ but u get the basic picture Lemme know what u think.. Suggestions/Criticism/Feedback and Brutal Honesty welcome !! http://www.acidplanet.com/artist.asp?PID=551724&T=2935 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xiphiaz Posted May 18, 2005 Share Posted May 18, 2005 Heres an updated version of the track... It still needs a lot of work on the breaks, transitions, mastering & EQ but u get the basic picture Lemme know what u think.. Suggestions/Criticism/Feedback and Brutal Honesty welcome !! http://www.acidplanet.com/artist.asp?PID=551724&T=2935 261870[/snapback] The percussion sounds nice, but I would like a bit fatter bass, and deeper. Try lowering the bassline a bit, and maybe add a sub too. (: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SunNata Posted May 18, 2005 Author Share Posted May 18, 2005 Thx for the tip xiphiaz.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SunNata Posted May 20, 2005 Author Share Posted May 20, 2005 No mor eviews ? I need feedback !!! Plzzz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cybernetika Posted May 21, 2005 Share Posted May 21, 2005 Nice intro. Yeah, the bass could indeed a bit lowered, I think it sounds a bit too high. Like xiphiaz said, very good percussion and percussive FX. 1:50 wonderful dark passage. I think the synth could get a bit sharper, try boosting the upper freqency, or add some distortion. Or add a gate, in my opinion it sounds a bit lame. Cool hi distorted synth. I think you could try adding another layer and it works fine. A friend once told me "good psy has to make the 10KHz+ area explode", you should try to ... Good job, keep it up Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SunNata Posted May 22, 2005 Author Share Posted May 22, 2005 Cybernetika Thanks for the feedback Abt the bass yeah im gonna lower it and give it a little more decay so its more smoother... Explosions at 10 Khz ... that can be arranged... for ur friend Hopefuly will have a an updated version up for some serious comments agai !! Thanks a lot !! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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