Time_Trap Posted June 5, 2005 Posted June 5, 2005 give feedback, no matter how harsh it is... Criticism is not bad , when it's constructive Track name is : Goalden Era =-=-=- Reason .rps file =-=-=- =-=-= DOWNLOAD/STREAM MP3 =-=-= Quote
Quark Posted June 6, 2005 Posted June 6, 2005 Not bad at all my friend, but your bass can be a little annoying in whole. But not that annoying, it is possible to live with it. You use alot of twisted effects and sounds, great ideas.. Nice job.. Looking forward to hear other tracks from you in the future.. Suntrip look out for this guy in the future Quote
Time_Trap Posted June 7, 2005 Author Posted June 7, 2005 i'd like to see a few more comments ... Quote
Anoebis Posted June 7, 2005 Posted June 7, 2005 For Some reason I can't download the track But I want to hear it! Quote
Time_Trap Posted June 7, 2005 Author Posted June 7, 2005 For Some reason I can't download the track But I want to hear it! 273983[/snapback] to d/load it you have to register in soundclick. if you just want to hear, just click on Hi-Fi , to stream it expecting your comments.... Quote
qa2pir Posted June 7, 2005 Posted June 7, 2005 You've got nice sounds and effects and the production of the effects is good. The mixing could use some work but what you should focus on is the variation. The bass seems to be the main element and it does not variate at all. The trippy side effects build slowly but the feeling is that nothing happens, until the last 1,5 minute where there is a break. But all you do really is bring out some parts. This song is well produced and has some nice effects but is in desperate need of a climax. It starts to rock subtly half a minute before the end. Take away some minutes before that and build upon that melody, because it with some more melodic elements this could be an adrenaline kick! Now i wont complain anymore... But i hope my feedback was a little better than a "this killargh rox" at least for your musical development. And i wanna tell you i'm not better than you at all. Just tried to give constructive tips! Keep it up! Quote
Time_Trap Posted June 8, 2005 Author Posted June 8, 2005 thnx 4 your feedback m8. so you think adding a mid bass would help it in terms of variation? a climax you mean something similar to the last minutes? Anoebis - still w8ing for your feedback Quote
qa2pir Posted June 8, 2005 Posted June 8, 2005 THE last minute introduces a nice groove, something it missed before. So i think you should decrease the little boring part before that and keep building on the groove you reach in teh end. Quote
Time_Trap Posted June 8, 2005 Author Posted June 8, 2005 THE last minute introduces a nice groove, something it missed before. So i think you should decrease the little boring part before that and keep building on the groove you reach in teh end. 274706[/snapback] exactly what i had in mind, will remake the boring bart before preparing this groove thnx again Quote
sarel_d Posted June 9, 2005 Posted June 9, 2005 nick InZoMNiAC you have a good style, i like goa trance boooooooooooooom Quote
Time_Trap Posted June 10, 2005 Author Posted June 10, 2005 nick InZoMNiAC you have a good style, i like goa trance boooooooooooooom 274848[/snapback] whatever Quote
Cybernetika Posted June 10, 2005 Posted June 10, 2005 Really awesome FX and weird synths you got there. The bass is great imo. Cool intro. Nice dark feel of the track, really takes me into a trippy state All in all the track is quite monotone. I'd try adding a bit of variation towards the end. Maybe alter the key. Or add more energy later on. All in all however the tunage is great, keep it up! Quote
Time_Trap Posted June 18, 2005 Author Posted June 18, 2005 thnx 4 your comments everyone i have perfected a bit, making it less monotonoys[i think ], waiting for a friend to do the final mastering Quote
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