Terih

[qa2pir]

Well, in terms of length it's almost done. But i need to tweak the mix and add a few oral noises () when i finally have time to go and buy a mic.

 

Try to make it through the whole song since it keeps changing all the time, so you can find, actually, a whole bunch of different genres in it.

 

Feel free to comment on anything, and i appreciate valuable mixing tips the most!

 

Length is 6:45, the final version will be about 7:30 ( i will add a short intro and an outro ).

 

Kbps: 128

 

One more thing: The output volume is very quiet so be prepared for that. I just wanted to make sure the file would be clipping-free.

 

Hifi stream:

http://www.soundclick.com/util/Streamm3u.m3u?ID=2502942&q=hi

 

My music page (if you have a soundclick account and want to download or if the direct streaming link doesn't work):

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/5/qa2pir_music.htm

[Cybernetika]

Very interesting style you have there. Sounds like experimental electronica to me.

First of all, your tune is way too silent, but I know, that can be fixed later on. I think you need fatter percussion, at least the snare. Try layering it with other sounds and it will instantly sound warmer and more lively.

You got way too sharp hi souds at 2:30... they make my ears bleed

And you need more deep bass frequencies so that the tune sounds warmer.

 

Keep this originality up and improve the quality

[qa2pir]

thanks for the feedback

The hi sounds i forgot before the mixdown but i knew that already.

About the bass: I will try to tweak the bass and maybe make it more upfront.

Maybe a little more lo-frequency percussion aswell?

 

Thank you very much!