Daze Posted June 17, 2005 Share Posted June 17, 2005 Here is a new tune I've been working on, it starts out pretty dark but gets melodic towards the end ;p http://www.rb-servers.nl/daze/song.mp3 Feedback is very much appreciated! I've, as some of you know, had a lot of problems with my basslines... I hope it's better this time - tell me what you think. I would also like to know if it sounds weird when the synth melody makes it first appearance... I can't really tell Thanks in advance! / Daze Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Carnage Posted June 17, 2005 Share Posted June 17, 2005 The bassline sound like it's in a low quality... And I think it's causes a disturbtion. The track itself is very nice... DARKY. But try to focus now on it's quality... Put some compressors. And Vol Limiter.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daze Posted June 18, 2005 Author Share Posted June 18, 2005 Thanks Carnage, appreciate your help! I agree about the bassline... gonna try some new settings for it. About the quality on the track as a whole, I kind of added sounds with the same frequency on purpose (to a certain limit ofcourse), to get that kind of "muddy", dark sound I wanted... it's hard to explain, but I think it sounds good ;p Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daze Posted June 18, 2005 Author Share Posted June 18, 2005 Anyone else? I would really like to know what you think about this song and its style. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daze Posted June 19, 2005 Author Share Posted June 19, 2005 Hello? I don't wanna nag, but I would really like to know... am I on to something nice here or totally on the wrong track? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shaft Posted June 19, 2005 Share Posted June 19, 2005 Lovely atmosphere. Dark and haunting. I don't like the bassline in here though, it's way too low. Good luck with the track though! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tunel Posted June 19, 2005 Share Posted June 19, 2005 hi... i listen your track. and i have some comments. first, the bassline i liked, i remember old times with the delta . i think you can go more depper, make it more and more agressive. second, the track as hole is quite boring, i think you can do it shrter and make more action. you have a lack of hi hats. you need more percussion. the melody isnt bad, but is not good. the sound of it liked. is some kind of retro shit. . and the kick you need to change it, put some more depper kick or more pounding, but the kick you use sound amateur. the idea is good, but you need to keep it interesting. you have the talent mate! go for it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daze Posted June 20, 2005 Author Share Posted June 20, 2005 Thanks a lot guys! I really appreciate your help, and I want you to know that everything you have said here has helped me Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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