New song, feedback appreciated!

[Daze]

I finished this song yesterday, I would really like some feedback!

 

URL: http://www.rb-servers.nl/daze/Daze%20-%20Battery.mp3

 

Thanks in advance!

 

/ Daze

[Time_Trap]

which appz did you use to make it?

nice atmospheric dark psychedelic track m8

 

i think you should change the lead sound that gets in at about 4.10 or something.,.. musically it's nice, i like the melody,[gets boring though after a while] but i think you should tweak the sound/delay/reverb effects, make it sound more complex and richer...

 

also add some more weird effects from parts to parts to make it more interesting

 

 

hope my feedback was kinda constructive

[Daze]

Thanks man!

 

Very nice feedback, I'm gonna work on what you said and update this track, cause I agree on all points.

 

I am using Fruityloops at the moment, with a bunch of VST's. The baseline is made with Audiorealism Bassline, and the pad and lead is made with Vanguard. I also use Soundforge and Hip Hop eJay for detail editing of effect sounds, and I use the effects from Waves VST package a lot! I think that's it

[Daze]

Okay the track is now slightly updated. Not much change... but I added some effects and made the lead a bit more "full"

[Time_Trap]

Okay the track is now slightly updated. Not much change... but I added some effects and made the lead a bit more "full"

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so should i redownload ?

[Daze]

Hehehe

 

Well like I said I really didn't change a lot, but it's not like I can stop you, eh?

[Time_Trap]

ok redownloaded , didnt notice much changes tbh...

well i think you should try distorting the lead sound that enters at 4:10 [you could add a chorus/flanger or unison or scream4 or other effects]... btw at certain points you could mute the kick playing and do a snare/drums lot so that you give more emphasis on the change... just dont overdo it.

keep it up.