paroxysm Posted July 6, 2005 Posted July 6, 2005 Hi, this is a song I made last night. enjoy! Artist: dementia Title: Scio Dolor http://www.soundclick.com/bands/5/sinfulparoxysm_music.htm Feedback always welcome thanks for listening! Quote
Cybernetika Posted July 6, 2005 Posted July 6, 2005 Hmm... I remember you from somewhere. Some other forum... Anyway, nice track, cool synths. The kick sounds at times a bit out of place, it could fit better in the mix. I think you can win a lot if you reduce the "oomph" of it a bit. In general you should soften it. And it should work better with the bass which could be punchier. Try shorter bass notes. The pad type sounds at 3:20 are disharmonic, you should consider changing them. Otherwise, solid tune. I like the beginning most, great buildup. Keep it up! Quote
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