please review the track i made with reason 2.0

[Regbar]

thanx for listening to my track called "Afraid", a track i made with reason 2.0, i reckon it is a quite naive track, about 150-155 bpm, i don't remember exactly...

 

anyway any feedback is welcome

 

 

 

http://rapidshare.de/files/3453983/R_gis_-...d__128.mp3.html (click "Free" below)

 

thanks!

[Cybernetika]

Nice, I like this kind of energetic stuff

Maybe stuff gets a little over the limits, but I use to push my tunes a little over the limits too. As long as nothing distorts it's fine ... I think this could use some more "warmth", some heavier lower-mid frequencies. Other than that, nice stuff I can't imagine anything to really improve this. Maybe clean up the mix a little. keep it up!