ritual om Posted September 4, 2005 Share Posted September 4, 2005 if you want to find out what paradise feels like,check out my new track: http://www.ic-musicmedia.com/artist_pages/...e.php?id=102661 comments are appreciated! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Time_Trap Posted September 4, 2005 Share Posted September 4, 2005 you posted this twice :S replied in the other topic Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sundrop Posted September 5, 2005 Share Posted September 5, 2005 if you want to find out what paradise feels like,check out my new track: http://www.ic-musicmedia.com/artist_pages/...e.php?id=102661 comments are appreciated! 328412[/snapback] the delay on your early sounds is jumbled. the song sounds nice but its confusing to listen to with structure and less whiny sound throughout it would be alot more enjoyable good sound quality tho Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ritual om Posted September 5, 2005 Author Share Posted September 5, 2005 don't be so bored to write something down! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sundrop Posted September 8, 2005 Share Posted September 8, 2005 i was thinking about this track today. there are really nice moments in it, and i imagine you had a lot of fun making it. but my advice on the structure... (if you are willing to listen, i assume so, since u ask for our feedback!!) IMO you could have a really great tune if you did these things: - make some minimal sections, so there are builds ups to the complexity - take out some of the whiny noise that goes on through the whole track, like around 4:00 and 6:00 - add some simple, subtle patterns to give flow and structure - some of the delays are so short it sounds jumbly - uplifting background pads (embracer if u use cubase) give some silence so that only one sound remains ... let them float ... thats paradise to me! this would make good beach music. hope my advice helps for your next track. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ritual om Posted September 9, 2005 Author Share Posted September 9, 2005 thanks a lot!yes,most of the ideas are nice and will try to carry them out! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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