The Boat ( My New track)

[Guest]

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=408031

Go Have a listen and tell me what you think.I appricate any constructive criticisims

Thanks Tryp

[Guest]

Commenting as I listen: The intro is slik, the vox I dig alot (some nasa 50+ official . Sporadic synth hits sometimes too simple. Groove startin at 1.19 is cool too, snare is a bit too loud( even for nite) . breaks are alrite but I get no substantial changes after breaks. You reached the peak in the song pretty soon, but drove it all the way to the end of track. I dig the gated synth lines in the background. After almost 4.00 I felt bored.Barely new elements(stories) introduced. Good overall production and leveling.

 

Nice dude, keep up the tune.

 

 

[N.I.V.R.A.]

great intro , your sound is good but you need some variation in your song and you miss a minute....it is a great start,keep on working....