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[ritual om]

this track was my first decent track back in 2001.this one is a new version totally reconstructed with all the good old arranngements and elements but enhanced with new sounds and melodies.the sonic manipulation is altered and improved.now i consider this possibly my best and i have one advice for you:listen to it carefully and let out what we all humans have deeply inside...homus ecstaticus!

 

click here:

 

http://www.ic-musicmedia.com/artist_pages/...e.php?id=102661

 

[ritual om]

no reply at all?

[qa2pir]

This section is too dead... Anyway, i'll give this a listen and tell you.

 

And i'd be happy if you took a look at my thread too

[qa2pir]

This has a way too long buildup. I'm at 4:00 now and it feels like it's just started. And the bass doesn't sound good (the main one), try to decrease the reverb on it and spend more time tweaking (maybe a bit deeper EQ too) and some of the casual bass sounds that drop in in the beginning feel like they blast your ears (notice that i listen on mid-quality headphones (no studio equipment or PA system).

 

However, i think the hi's and mids are good, nice melodies, storytelling song with many fun effects and well mixed (despite the bass issue).

It's not extatic but very... i dunno how to say. It's got a good feeling.

 

Now at 6:00 approx it's starting to sound more busy.

The bass fit's better now with all the wirling melodies but the sound is still a bit lame. The small break at 6:02 and the acidic stuff that follows is good.

 

If you could concentrate a little bit more on melody developement (but keep the good effects and stuff) it would be even better (of course).

And try to keep it a bit shorter than 16 minutes :S

It's a bit slow moving still. I sense some inspiration from Pleiadians - Modulation

 

at 11:00 you introduce a more pumping, minimalistic and experimental mood. It sounds a bit like koxbox. I think this is more interestinig than the acidic effect- driven madness before.

 

One problem is that you overuse reverb. All the reverbs should be shorter, it could actually make the whole song better =)

 

Now it's beginning to sound like a climax. The bass sounds much better with this slower melody than with the full-on from before.

The effects are less chaotic and more planned and better than in the beginning.

 

The ending with the melodies only is the best part of the track

 

So here's a resumé:

 

I'm suprrised that someone here dares to try stuff out of psy limits =)

This is experimental goa, very long and evolving (could almost be split up in smaller tracks) and original melodies. Much time is spent on it i can hear that, but your mixing skills can improve.

so, bring the reverb down, compress more, and keep being creative

And try to make them a little shorter.

 

Ok, i've been criticizing you a lot, but that's only because your music interests me and i want to help you. This track is probably technically better than my stuff but i hope this review will help you evolve.

[ritual om]

thanks for the time spent on the review.i know it took you a lot of time:)

 

and yes pleiadians-modulation has more inspiration

i'll check yours and give feedback:)

much appreciated!

[qa2pir]

No problem!