chibirock Posted December 17, 2005 Share Posted December 17, 2005 HI evryone, THis is my first post here. Please give me your advise/comment. thank you Chibirock-Mahena http://s30.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=1XATYBE...B2025N953DRI2B4 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xiphiaz Posted December 19, 2005 Share Posted December 19, 2005 Cool track! Progressive intro, or, progressive tune overall (: really like the bass, very nice. Although I'm not sure of the first synth you have going there starting at 0:53 and again at 4:30 , doesn't really fit IMO /: As for the melody that fades in at 5:00, I'd modify the highest note in that melody, think that would do the trick. And that guitar-thingy at 5:34 get rid of it! It ruins the tune IMO (: I really like the part from 6:12 and forward, nice! (: Keep it up! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chibirock Posted December 19, 2005 Author Share Posted December 19, 2005 Cool track! Progressive intro, or, progressive tune overall (: really like the bass, very nice. Although I'm not sure of the first synth you have going there starting at 0:53 and again at 4:30 , doesn't really fit IMO /: As for the melody that fades in at 5:00, I'd modify the highest note in that melody, think that would do the trick. And that guitar-thingy at 5:34 get rid of it! It ruins the tune IMO (: I really like the part from 6:12 and forward, nice! (: Keep it up! 400268[/snapback] Hi, xiphiaz THanks for your feedback! Your advise make sence. I'm happy to hear that. I checked out your track. It's awesome!!!!! Nice work Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mind.breeder Posted December 19, 2005 Share Posted December 19, 2005 Very nice tune interesting segmentation 2.45 - impressive tickling sample 3.08 - i would put something before the kick returns (this way it is too lurid), maybe some fill in or something around 4.50 - wow, really ominous atmosphere is made I agree with xiphias about the sample variation trick. The guitar doesnt fit very well, but it's great at its own, you should use it in some different track. Generally, I don't like the kick, it's too classic for a song this unusual (hmmm maybe not, but it feels awkward). I am glad it's not a classical psytrance structured song. Very good, keep it up Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chibirock Posted December 19, 2005 Author Share Posted December 19, 2005 Very nice tune interesting segmentation 2.45 - impressive tickling sample 3.08 - i would put something before the kick returns (this way it is too lurid), maybe some fill in or something around 4.50 - wow, really ominous atmosphere is made I agree with xiphias about the sample variation trick. The guitar doesnt fit very well, but it's great at its own, you should use it in some different track. Generally, I don't like the kick, it's too classic for a song this unusual (hmmm maybe not, but it feels awkward). I am glad it's not a classical psytrance structured song. Very good, keep it up 400566[/snapback] Hi,mind.breeder Thanks for practical advice. I see the track from different view now which is great. Kik・・・・・・I really love this Kik Anyway,I 'm really appreciated Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mind.breeder Posted December 19, 2005 Share Posted December 19, 2005 May be beacuse I begin to hate typical psytrance kicks It is probably good, just my taste... I dont know Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chibirock Posted December 19, 2005 Author Share Posted December 19, 2005 May be beacuse I begin to hate typical psytrance kicks It is probably good, just my taste... I dont know 400638[/snapback] I know what you mean Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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