my first jungle/d'n'b track

[Towelie]

here ..going to make it longer still, feel free to comment

[Guest Cosmogenesis]

Sorry man, but it's a psy-forum here

[Towelie]

Sorry man, but it's a psy-forum here 

492507[/snapback]

so? does it say somewhere you can only put psy tracks here `?

[Daniël]

nooo, don't listen to Cosmogenesis!!!!!!!! i hope he's jokin anyway. post all your music here that is not psy.

 

I like your track btw. The breaks are really good. I only miss some more melodie and the rbeak stays the same for almost 2:33 min.

[Guest Cosmogenesis]

nooo, don't listen to Cosmogenesis!!!!!!!!  i hope he's jokin anyway. post all your music here that is not psy.

 

I like your track btw.  The breaks are really good.  I only miss some more melodie and the rbeak stays the same for almost 2:33 min.

492531[/snapback]

Man, it's a joke, of course! Good track, Towellie! I will listen more it and after make comments!

[Daniël]

hey towelie, here's a track of mine. It's pretty short and it also stays pretty monotonous but it's background music for a promo video.

 

clicky

[mind.breeder]

Sounds good so far...

Give it some melodic motive and it will rock

[McKoy]

Sounds good so far...

Give it some melodic motive and it will rock

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Yes it sounds good but it also sounds a bit empty. A "main theme" is lacking I think : you've paid much attention to little details, but you forgot about melodies , bass etc.....

Some acid lines or some real instruments(like saxophone or piano) would fit well with your track I think.

Have you ever heard of Amon Tobin?