mental motion

[m00n]

hello,

 

here's a little track i've done these last days..

 

Mental motion

 

the mood of the track is rather dark, so you're warned

 

i know it's far from being perfect, or even finished, but i'd like to get some feedback or advice to move forward.

 

bye

[TechNology]

hmmm,..i dont know what to say,.maybe to minimalistic for me,..your sounds are a little bit to week,.there is not to much diference,.everythinh is just flat,.thats just my opinion,.dont take it personaly,.

 

here is my wision of so called "minimal dark",..so u can spit on me too

[m00n]

thanx for ur listen,

 

i know that i tend to lower mediums, partly because of my speakers, so yes the mix can sound flat someway, i'll try to correct this, and so it needs more variation, i think the same too, maybe i needed someone to spit to be sure