XTRON track

[Ormion]

Hey guys, ok this is my first track I dare to present here. It's called XTRON and the style is hard dark psy with strange effects, but also some melodic lines. Of course I have to warn you that it's amateur stuff since I'm a beginner and I use only my crappy PC and Cubase.

Anyway, in case you want to listen to it here is the link:

www.sendspace.com/file/glaquf

 

Any feedback is welcome

[Symphoid]

Hey Ormion Hahaha, I always love your avatars.

 

Dark indeed This isn't bad for a first track. You've got the concept of flow and transition and seem to know your way around your software. I don't know too much about this type of production, but i think the kick needs to be heavier or raised a bit. Maybe vary the melodies more with a few subtle chord changes. Good work. Definitely make more tunes.

[Ormion]

Hey Ormion Hahaha, I always love your avatars.

 

Dark indeed    This isn't bad for a first track. You've got the concept of flow and transition and seem to know your way around your software. I don't know too much about this type of production, but i think the kick needs to be heavier or raised a bit. Maybe vary the melodies more with a few subtle chord changes. Good work. Definitely make more tunes.

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Thanks a lot

 

Anyone else?