my first complete track

[kabamaru]

hello guys & gals, I would appreciate some feedback on this tune:

 

 

Spinnet - Coretex (Tek Mix)

 

 

I would classify it as techno-trance

 

let me know what you think

 

cheers

[w_lizzard]

A nice relaxing tune.A bit monotonic.

I think if you raise the bmps you'll get better action on dancefloor.

Bring some more noise and tech effects in.

 

Thanks for sharing.

[kabamaru]

thanx for the suggestions man!