Mycosis Posted February 27, 2007 Share Posted February 27, 2007 Im very happy with a song... finally. At least part of it. I think its a great melody and I like the intro, but I am having a hard time transitioning from into to chorus.... right now I just have it go directly in heh. Basically only uploaded so I could get some advice/criticism. Download it here: http://www.ctel.net/~mcdfam/entity.mp3 or Check it out at: http://www.myspace.com/mycosismusic Thank you! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jikkenteki Posted February 28, 2007 Share Posted February 28, 2007 First thing that I notice when going from the intro bits is that the deep bassy swelling pad type sound goes away and nothing replaces it's space sonically sothat when then melody part comes in it feels a bit lonely to my ears. Try adding something else under the melody to give the ears some choices. Could be another pad, could be some sort of supporting line, whatever works. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gaffel Posted March 4, 2007 Share Posted March 4, 2007 emmm. u feel it and this is the way to making it pure of all the strange habbitments. the track i s good, but what is ur prob with it. i like it as it is. im me Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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