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One of the better psy tracks I've heard in this section. But I have some criticism:

 

- The full-on thing is generic. It sounds like lots of other artists. Mostly it sounds like Logic Bomb from about five years ago.

- Pretty much all of minute 5 (long break) is filler and can be removed, in my opinion.

- I like the melodic elements (except for the melody in minute 5, which is forced and awkward).

- I felt it was too "safe" and could use some more oomph/distortion/boost/gusto/randomness.

- The structure is solid. It's listenable and "nice" (definitely a morning track). I would've liked to hear some more thickness, rawness, anti-structure and originality. But that's my taste, and one person's feedback.

 

Good luck! :D

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