Spinecord Posted May 20, 2007 Share Posted May 20, 2007 This is my first completed track, I'm just now getting into making this type of music, mostly interested in psy, goa, hard house, etc. Any comments would be nice. It's a pretty short track since it's my first attempt, only 3:40. http://www.speedyshare.com/140282413.html Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Veracohr Posted May 21, 2007 Share Posted May 21, 2007 It needs some direction. Some sort of guiding theme. There's ideas there but no real structure. Also, that saw wave thing that is pretty constant throughout--I think that would sound good if you broke it up a bit, created a rhythmic pattern with it instead of a constant sound. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spinecord Posted May 21, 2007 Author Share Posted May 21, 2007 Thanks for the tips! I will try that. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CosmicEquilibrium Posted May 21, 2007 Share Posted May 21, 2007 It looks cool like industrial. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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