First track i guess... or something like that

[Erezblm]

Im just learning, not something serious. actually i worked a lot on this one.

I aware that Im using normal stereo speakers, so i guess the sound will be different at your speakers.

I aware that the kicks and the bassline ain't so good, but what can i do, the kicks are just some samples, and the bass is the best i could find i guess.

i aware to the clicks on the first seconds

 

but all in all i think the track is not bad at all... (well why would i think different its my track).

i would like some comments and i hope thats the place to post it.

 

http://www.sendspace.com/file/yau0t4

 

by the way if something here is not original, please let me know. thats always the first of my concerns

[Veracohr]

The majority of it seems kind of aimless, more like it's a showcase for cool sounds that don't have much of a musical theme behind them. There's some cool parts, but no musical cohesion. It gets pretty cool about 4:00.