First attempt at a psy-chill track

[Subliminal_Float]

Hello everyone!

 

My first attempt at composition, arrangement & mixing of a track. I switched my sub-genre of interest from goatrance to psychill around 3 years ago.. and the varied existence of this sub-genre has been amazing me ever since..

 

Anyways, I saw a few, supportively followed up "New Track/Feedback Required" posts.. Just like other amateur producers, I'd like to know if what am doing makes sense to anybody else.. Also, if my track seems weak in a particular area of production, arrangement or mastering, I would be glad to know..

 

Here are the links to the track(128 kbps MP3) :-

 

Subliminal_Float -=- Mysticness (Rapidshare Link)

 

(Uploading.com Link)

 

 

Thanks all for your time.. Boom.

 

Sub_Float

 

I understand, its posted in the wrong section.. but the point was too gather some technical feedback on the subject. Hope that explains..

[Veracohr]

Unless this thread was moved here from some other forum, I think it's in the right one.

 

The idea and atmosphere are good. You've got interesting sounds, although the mix as a whole is kind of dark. It could use some changes though - the whole length is just playing off one idea. It's more like a jam than a completed track.

 

Definitely good for a first attempt, keep working on it.

[Subliminal_Float]

Unless this thread was moved here from some other forum, I think it's in the right one.

 

The idea and atmosphere are good. You've got interesting sounds, although the mix as a whole is kind of dark. It could use some changes though - the whole length is just playing off one idea. It's more like a jam than a completed track.

 

Definitely good for a first attempt, keep working on it.

 

 

Thanks Veracohr for the input.. Embarassed, but I loved the way you phrased it "It's more like a jam than a completed track." Lol.. True that.

 

I kind of wanted the track to die just once.. cos I tried to initiate the track with a long 'evolving' intro.. Don't really know how that went..

 

Anyways, I always find myself short of an explanation when production/creativity/arrangement come around in question. Simply put, "Does everyone out there want originality, pristine production, something new or do they want something enjoyable, be it a remixed version of a 70's track with tasteful work done on it.."

 

Sub_Float

[buzzman]

Yeah like veracohr said, it's a really nice atmosphere you create up until 3-4 minutes, but it get's a little to repetitive with no exiting changes that graps your attention... But you should definitely work a whole track out of this, it could be really cool! keep it up

[karan129]

Its sounds fine to me. Good work for a first attempt It just needs some variation and improving the melodies a bit would help too.

[Subliminal_Float]

Thanks Veracohr, Buzzman & Karan for your suggestions.. although, being an engineering student, I hardly enjoy, having the luxury of some free time at hand.. lol.. but nonetheless, I'll try to make the necessary changes as & when I can.. I'll post the edited/improved version soon..

 

Respect

 

Sub_Float