Subliminal_Float Posted November 25, 2008 Share Posted November 25, 2008 Hello everyone! My first attempt at composition, arrangement & mixing of a track. I switched my sub-genre of interest from goatrance to psychill around 3 years ago.. and the varied existence of this sub-genre has been amazing me ever since.. Anyways, I saw a few, supportively followed up "New Track/Feedback Required" posts.. Just like other amateur producers, I'd like to know if what am doing makes sense to anybody else.. Also, if my track seems weak in a particular area of production, arrangement or mastering, I would be glad to know.. Here are the links to the track(128 kbps MP3) :- Subliminal_Float -=- Mysticness (Rapidshare Link) (Uploading.com Link) Thanks all for your time.. Boom. Sub_Float I understand, its posted in the wrong section.. but the point was too gather some technical feedback on the subject. Hope that explains.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Veracohr Posted November 26, 2008 Share Posted November 26, 2008 Unless this thread was moved here from some other forum, I think it's in the right one. The idea and atmosphere are good. You've got interesting sounds, although the mix as a whole is kind of dark. It could use some changes though - the whole length is just playing off one idea. It's more like a jam than a completed track. Definitely good for a first attempt, keep working on it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Subliminal_Float Posted November 26, 2008 Author Share Posted November 26, 2008 Unless this thread was moved here from some other forum, I think it's in the right one. The idea and atmosphere are good. You've got interesting sounds, although the mix as a whole is kind of dark. It could use some changes though - the whole length is just playing off one idea. It's more like a jam than a completed track. Definitely good for a first attempt, keep working on it. Thanks Veracohr for the input.. Embarassed, but I loved the way you phrased it "It's more like a jam than a completed track." Lol.. True that. I kind of wanted the track to die just once.. cos I tried to initiate the track with a long 'evolving' intro.. Don't really know how that went.. Anyways, I always find myself short of an explanation when production/creativity/arrangement come around in question. Simply put, "Does everyone out there want originality, pristine production, something new or do they want something enjoyable, be it a remixed version of a 70's track with tasteful work done on it.." Sub_Float Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
buzzman Posted November 27, 2008 Share Posted November 27, 2008 Yeah like veracohr said, it's a really nice atmosphere you create up until 3-4 minutes, but it get's a little to repetitive with no exiting changes that graps your attention... But you should definitely work a whole track out of this, it could be really cool! keep it up Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
karan129 Posted December 11, 2008 Share Posted December 11, 2008 Its sounds fine to me. Good work for a first attempt It just needs some variation and improving the melodies a bit would help too. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Subliminal_Float Posted December 24, 2008 Author Share Posted December 24, 2008 Thanks Veracohr, Buzzman & Karan for your suggestions.. although, being an engineering student, I hardly enjoy, having the luxury of some free time at hand.. lol.. but nonetheless, I'll try to make the necessary changes as & when I can.. I'll post the edited/improved version soon.. Respect Sub_Float Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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