Lemmiwinks Posted April 17, 2009 Share Posted April 17, 2009 Just kidding but now that I got you to click on the topic, I just made a dark trance track and would like to know your reactions to it: Moondancer - WW3 and don't hesitate to give me ANY feedback, even if you find it's crap Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
supergroover Posted April 18, 2009 Share Posted April 18, 2009 listening now: kick can be a little tighter. maybe eq a bit or make the sample a little shorter. squeky sound is a little high in volume. hihat can be a little louder. The bass/kick combo can use a little more groove. Maybe add some percussion with some funky effect. Too many breaks that take out the flow of the track. Adding a new instrument can also be done by taking away on kick instead of 8. To keep it interesting you need to add alot more sounds i think. Lots more effects with delays for example. Also the sound in total is a little muddy. Try to give each sound its own place in the mix with eq, panning and timing. Especially the kick/bass combi. Don't worry if this track is not perfect. just keep building them. the more you make the better they will sound like. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
buzzman Posted April 18, 2009 Share Posted April 18, 2009 Whats up Lemmi, the groover is right, the bassdepartment do sound a little muddy.... Sort it out with cutting lengths and EQ'ing If it's a synthesized kick, maybe tweak around with it a little Also the stereo-image is something I paid instant notice at, it sounds like everything is comming from the middle of my monitor-setup, if you pan your synths and drums and then put some stereoimaging on the master (izotope ozone4 is really eazy to use IMO, just pick a preset you like an tweak around till it sounds like you want ) So when you close your eyes, you can hear the bass in the middle, the drums from each side (spread sound) and the highpitch synths/effects comming from above in stereo Never paid notice to this until i resently got my ADAM monitors, but it is ONE of the things sepperating good pro music with ours Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bwhale Posted April 19, 2009 Share Posted April 19, 2009 I like your style we should collaborate. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
frozen dream Posted April 19, 2009 Share Posted April 19, 2009 woohooo derango better watch it now! :clapping: after all your muttering about music this doesn't sound too bad lemmi! sometimes you just need to do the length to see where you're at. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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