Multiphase Posted June 8, 2009 Share Posted June 8, 2009 I have made a tester for an outline of a track, where some feedback would be greatly appreciated. Especially concerning how the bass/kick sounds, and if the melody/pad combination has potential. You might need to turn up the volume quite a bit by the way. http://www.sendspace.com/file/wi4vje Thanks in advance! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
N2O Posted June 11, 2009 Share Posted June 11, 2009 Your kick and bass compliment each other well in my headphones (im travelling so no monitors atm) The bass does get a wee bit repetetive towards second half but with more sound layers that might not be an issue... As an outline i think it is great! In regards to the melody it sounds very chilled compared to your pounding kick and bass. As if you want two go two different places at the same time. (Personal opinion!) All in all good effort i think You should keep working on it! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Multiphase Posted June 12, 2009 Author Share Posted June 12, 2009 Thanks for the feedback N20 - greatly appreciated. Have tried to make a bit more variation in the bass and added an extra lead, plus loads of other sweeps and sounds. New version is here: http://www.sendspace.com/file/wygksv Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
N2O Posted June 12, 2009 Share Posted June 12, 2009 Now we are definately getting somewhere! I dig it! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
buzzman Posted June 14, 2009 Share Posted June 14, 2009 Nice sound I would give it some more bass though, subbass or smt, sounds a little thin in the bottom if you know what i mean Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Multiphase Posted June 15, 2009 Author Share Posted June 15, 2009 Thanks for the comments, both of you. Really encouraging Have made a new version with the bass turned up just a tad, and with some extra effects and melodies. http://www.sendspace.com/file/bebrbt Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Multiphase Posted July 23, 2009 Author Share Posted July 23, 2009 After a while without opening the project, I gave it a bit more work now. Added a few extra lead-sounds and melodies to give it a bit more peak-feeling. The section is 4-minutes long and starts in the main breakdown. By the way; there are a few "stratchy" sounds in there. Don't know what's causing them, but they're in every export I make - at random times it seems. Feedback much appreciated! http://www.yousendit.com/download/Y1RwcHBOR0Y5NVYzZUE9PQ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
supergroover Posted July 24, 2009 Share Posted July 24, 2009 sounds quite good! maybe it is a good idea to give the bass a little more decay or release to fatten it up a little. Or compress it a little more. That way it is a littlemore obvious. Hihat is a little too loud imho. And panned to the right? Might be good to pan it center. Maybe add some more percussion that is panned. That gives it a little more groove as well. As it still is a little 'constant' now. sounds you added go well with eachother. Might be also a good idea to add a little arpegiated sound in the mids that fills up the track. Doesnt have to be very obviously in the mix but it can give some more flavour and distraction from the other sounds. Keep going! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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