What do you guys think of this tune I made?

[Uth]

Hey everybody,

 

Just wanted to hear what some of you think of this tune I made a while ago, Its the first track I ever did in this genre and never really got a good idea of what people thought of it.

It's sort of a ambient/up-tempo laid back track.

 

Link: http://www.megaupload.com/?d=ZYQPVTYZ

 

So what do you think? Would you think it would be cool if I did more tracks in this genre.

 

Thank you guys for everything.

 

Peace

[Veracohr]

From a composition standpoint it's pretty good. Just a couple sound aspects I don't like:

 

- The kick is a bit too soft and squishy.

- There's a really low frequency sound that comes in around 4:26 that is kind of useless; it just muddies up the overall sound without adding anything good to the track.

[Uth]

From a composition standpoint it's pretty good. Just a couple sound aspects I don't like:

 

- The kick is a bit too soft and squishy.

- There's a really low frequency sound that comes in around 4:26 that is kind of useless; it just muddies up the overall sound without adding anything good to the track.

 

Thanks a lot for feedback... Will fix.

 

Anymore opinions?

[Djuna]

- Good use of pads, sounds nice 'n thick. Bird samples sound good too, no low quality here

- the kick really sucks :-( needs more low and definitely more mid, but I think the best way to do it is just to create a new one!

- bassline needs some work too, but maybe that's just because of the kick, don't know. Can't hear it that well in the parts where there are melodies.

- nice melodies and cool story bro'! Nothing really new but that doesn't matter - would like to hear more of such things!

 

= Thumb goes up!

[Uth]

- Good use of pads, sounds nice 'n thick. Bird samples sound good too, no low quality here

- the kick really sucks :-( needs more low and definitely more mid, but I think the best way to do it is just to create a new one!

- bassline needs some work too, but maybe that's just because of the kick, don't know. Can't hear it that well in the parts where there are melodies.

- nice melodies and cool story bro'! Nothing really new but that doesn't matter - would like to hear more of such things!

 

= Thumb goes up!

 

Thanks mate! I gotta agree... the kick really does suck. And the bass needs work. I'll definitely do some more work on the mixing.

 

Thanks a lot for feedback.

 

Any more opinions are very much welcome.

[Otto Matta]

I found it nice but generic. It didn't do anything new and interesting, so my attention wandered.

[Uth]

I found it nice but generic. It didn't do anything new and interesting, so my attention wandered.

 

Thanks for feedback but I haven't exactly tried to be innovative. It was my first time doing something like this...

 

But thanks anyway.