Uth Posted November 22, 2009 Share Posted November 22, 2009 Hey everybody, Just wanted to hear what some of you think of this tune I made a while ago, Its the first track I ever did in this genre and never really got a good idea of what people thought of it. It's sort of a ambient/up-tempo laid back track. Link: http://www.megaupload.com/?d=ZYQPVTYZ So what do you think? Would you think it would be cool if I did more tracks in this genre. Thank you guys for everything. Peace Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Veracohr Posted November 22, 2009 Share Posted November 22, 2009 From a composition standpoint it's pretty good. Just a couple sound aspects I don't like: - The kick is a bit too soft and squishy. - There's a really low frequency sound that comes in around 4:26 that is kind of useless; it just muddies up the overall sound without adding anything good to the track. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Uth Posted November 22, 2009 Author Share Posted November 22, 2009 From a composition standpoint it's pretty good. Just a couple sound aspects I don't like: - The kick is a bit too soft and squishy. - There's a really low frequency sound that comes in around 4:26 that is kind of useless; it just muddies up the overall sound without adding anything good to the track. Thanks a lot for feedback... Will fix. Anymore opinions? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Djuna Posted November 22, 2009 Share Posted November 22, 2009 - Good use of pads, sounds nice 'n thick. Bird samples sound good too, no low quality here - the kick really sucks :-( needs more low and definitely more mid, but I think the best way to do it is just to create a new one! - bassline needs some work too, but maybe that's just because of the kick, don't know. Can't hear it that well in the parts where there are melodies. - nice melodies and cool story bro'! Nothing really new but that doesn't matter - would like to hear more of such things! = Thumb goes up! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Uth Posted November 22, 2009 Author Share Posted November 22, 2009 - Good use of pads, sounds nice 'n thick. Bird samples sound good too, no low quality here - the kick really sucks :-( needs more low and definitely more mid, but I think the best way to do it is just to create a new one! - bassline needs some work too, but maybe that's just because of the kick, don't know. Can't hear it that well in the parts where there are melodies. - nice melodies and cool story bro'! Nothing really new but that doesn't matter - would like to hear more of such things! = Thumb goes up! Thanks mate! I gotta agree... the kick really does suck. And the bass needs work. I'll definitely do some more work on the mixing. Thanks a lot for feedback. Any more opinions are very much welcome. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Otto Matta Posted November 23, 2009 Share Posted November 23, 2009 I found it nice but generic. It didn't do anything new and interesting, so my attention wandered. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Uth Posted November 24, 2009 Author Share Posted November 24, 2009 I found it nice but generic. It didn't do anything new and interesting, so my attention wandered. Thanks for feedback but I haven't exactly tried to be innovative. It was my first time doing something like this... But thanks anyway. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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