Delicious Petal - first 'serious' track

[siliconnexioN]

Hey peeps, I'm 20 years old from Adelaide, Australia and started producing my own brand of goa in mid 2009 under the name "Delicious Petal" :] I made my first serious track a couple of months ago but I've been unable to get much feedback due to the scene being pretty small where I live. So I'm posting my tracks on psynews for you all to hear I'd love to hear some constructive criticism!

 

http://deliciouspetal.bandcamp.com (highly recommended hosting site btw, free + no ads)

available in mp3 320kbps, FLAC, WAV

 

Recommend listening to track 1 first. (has a pretty long intro) It's actually around 12 mins long but my PC ran out of processing power so you'll have to do with the shortened version

 

oh, and first post. I've been lurking for quite a while :3

peace, thanks for listening

[Psybro]

Awesome EP release

 

 

Best vibes bro

 

take care

[Trance2MoveU]

First thanks for sharing and welcome to Psynews! I love long intros, and that wobbly bass in the first track is awesome. I would love to hear what the long version sounded like. It's juicy and gurgly. Nice! I know it is unmastered and it sounds like the kick needs some more punch.

 

The second track is so short (just a taste) but the sounds are crystal clear and I love the kick roll. Sort of Bypass Unit style. I like how the goa melody sneaks in behind the pad. Sweet. Maybe the hi-hats need to be a little louder...

 

3rd track has a nice industrial feel. A nice dirty bass, and I like the final melody....sounds good.

 

4th track sound juicy as well, love that. This one sounds the most "goa" to me. Very spiritual. Me likey.

 

Mike A at Cronomi might like this as your vision of goa is not the sun drenched melodic beaches of India, but more of a darker, sinister side.

 

 

 

There is some definite potential here. Keep up the great work!

 

Mdk