my first track demo

[metamorpheo]

hello my friends......

this is my first track and really would like to know your opinion......

have a nice trip!

 

http://soundcloud.com/metamorpheo/once-upon-a-time28510

[Jaszi]

First of all, the link doesn't work for me, so I had to search your project on soundcloud

 

- I liked the violin in your track, it gives a big boost I think.

- the bubblings around 2:30 ends quickly, if I were you I would last them longer and take them down slowly

 

Not bad track for the first one!

[supergroover]

It still sounds a bit chaotic to me. Try to find sounds that fit well together. And give them all a place in the mix, think of panning, freq spectrum and on the timeline. Also the bass doesnt really come through well. There is mostly just bottomend of the bassline. Try to eq the main mid frequency of the bass out of the leads and other sounds.

 

good luck!

[metamorpheo]

First of all, the link doesn't work for me, so I had to search your project on soundcloud

 

- I liked the violin in your track, it gives a big boost I think.

- the bubblings around 2:30 ends quickly, if I were you I would last them longer and take them down slowly

 

Not bad track for the first one!

 

thanxxx man!

[metamorpheo]

It still sounds a bit chaotic to me. Try to find sounds that fit well together. And give them all a place in the mix, think of panning, freq spectrum and on the timeline. Also the bass doesnt really come through well. There is mostly just bottomend of the bassline. Try to eq the main mid frequency of the bass out of the leads and other sounds.

 

good luck!

 

thanxxx man! i'm working carefully in mastering track...and i'm going to post the first mastering now....

i hope to do a good job..........