Ruby Plexus - Temporal Causality Loop

[johnb820]

Hi everyone. I've been really hesitant to share some of the stuff I work on in my spare time, but I think this is the first track I've made that I am satisfied with enough to post here. So here it goes... Any suggestions would be welcome. Turn up your volume a bit since it's obviously not mastered properly. I hope someone might enjoy it.

 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GfW9CoHPfsc

[Panoptes]

Its ok. I would introduce more sound textures, breaks, also a solid melody that cuts through the mix wouldn't hurt. Make it more psychedelic: try automating some resonance/sync/etc...

[johnb820]

Thanks for the criticism.