Track review request

[Fatica_Labs]

Would you like to help improve my work?

here a couple of track to look at:

https://soundcloud.com/felice-pollano/more-other

https://soundcloud.com/felice-pollano/seek-for-the-road

 

Interested both in musical tips ( since I'm self taughting ) and general technical tips.

I appreciate your help and critics,

Cheers

[Rotwang]

Pretty good, I feel like the tracks could do with being a bit denser though.

[Fatica_Labs]

Thank you very much for reply,

you mean more layer on sinbgle instruments, or more melodic variety ( as counterpoint ), or more pads?

[Rotwang]

I just meant more instruments and effects.

[Fatica_Labs]

Thanks, will try