would anyone care to listen to a track I made?

[Guest combeferre]

Hi, I've put a track up at www.mp3.com/musical_wednesdays

It's kind of dodgy I know, so I would really appreciate some suggestions of how to make less-dodgy tracks in the future. Sorry about the poor mix, I don't have proper speakers to mix on.

 

Thanks =)

[Guest eXpulse]

Elevator music:)

[Guest PsiloCybian]

good beat and a cool bass line . sounds funky but i like it ,although im am not into that kind of music . if you like you can hear my song at http://artists.mp3s.com/artists/504/psilocybian.html