New Tracks :) Comments Very Welcomed ;)

[Guest aslak]

here's the links to my 2 latest tracks.....

 

If you have a little time to send a comment, I would be very very pleased to read it

 

 

 

'Le Rêve Etrange de Mr BimBam' - 143bpm - 10m34 - 07.2003

http://home.worldcom.ch/laho/Aslak-LeReveE...eDeMrBimBam.mp3

 

'Les Ombres de L'Ouest' - 145bpm - 8m58 - 06.2003

http://home.worldcom.ch/laho/Aslak-LesOmbr...resDeLOuest.mp3

 

 

 

Hope you'll enjoy

 

Aslak

[Guest Jeroen]

Review of Le Reve Etrange De Mr BimBam (I'll do just one, if you don't mind)

 

uh-oh...this is not reálly my genre..but i said i was gonna review this so i will!

 

first 4 minutes a lot of bass and noises, i like the voice samples you put in between now and then sounds pretty professional so far. I don't really like the hi-hat though, it's just lost too much of it's high frequencies, or so it seems..

 

5:33...time for change..I've heard the low synth now..oh! and there change seems to come. I like the crash + bassdrum combination

 

around 7:20..the low synth is back? it seemed to sound a bit reverbed in the beginning..that might be not that bad an idea by the way, a little more reverb in your track? I don't know it's not like I really miss it, but maybe it would work out nice although reverb often does give a more ambient kind of sound to a track, doesn't it? that may not be the atmosphere you're trying to create here..

 

9:39..suddenly notice the ahmm kind of wooden-stick percussion thingy? with a bit of delay on it. it's nice! ^-^ (*this was a sidenote )

 

= end of song =

well, my opinion, you sound pretty advanced it sounds like you've come quite a way already

I can't give you that many tips, this just isn't my genre one thing I do suggest is maybe you can put in some melodies on high notes? (like 5th octave or so) possibly delay/reverb 'em a bit, if you can get a nice tune that certainly wouldn't have to take away any of the atmosphere!

 

good luck with your music in the future, and I hope I could help you (even if it was just a little )