Guest ShinE Posted July 8, 2004 Share Posted July 8, 2004 Greetings! comments & opinions & especially critics requested on: http://www.samsara-music.nl/track_info.php?trackID=98 enjoy! Tnx!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest HILLTOP82(When the shit h Posted July 8, 2004 Share Posted July 8, 2004 Ok the intro is pretty good... I like the first melodic "sunrise" instrument kicking of the tune, and the female voice was OK. But I will go hard on you and say it Lacks a good mellodic vibe, theres no main tune that cathces on... And the drum feels a bit lame, maybe some variations? Now I KNOW its really hard to make this stuff... trying myself.... Just judgeing it on a pro level thats all... My opinion is: THERE has to be some kind of emotionall tune going strong and rising... even if it is hidden in the back.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest ShinE Posted July 8, 2004 Share Posted July 8, 2004 tnx 4 the feedback & opinions! yeah, ive gotten the same response from others also, there is no main lead or something that is grabbing the attention, and the percussion section is bleak, so it won't keep people dancing. I'll have to work on that. My drift is to make ambientish soundscapes on a trance groove, so maybe thats why its lacking the bite a standard trancetrack would have. The theme and story can then be created by the procession of the different melodies. I find that if i use just one main melody it gets cheesy very fast, if you know what i mean. Standardisation is a nasty stylekiller. There is so much stuff thats just so copycattingly identical in sound and structure. just looking for that different vibe Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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